Photoshoot original - two people drunk.

The negatives of this image are; the background needs to be out of focus and have a blurred depth of field, but also how the colours don't work and how you can see a vending machine in the background and also bowling pins. The movement of the plate is blurred so takes the attention away from the main focus which is the whole idea. The colours work and complement each other. The paper chain works as leading lines. The drink is rebellion, the splodges on the wall is fun and kids / tea party.

The background doesn't work because of the people walking in it. It just needs to be cropped in. All the plates complement each other and relate back to my theme. The pose is fun and relaxed. This is what I wanted from this photo shoot - just for it to be fun and a laugh, because that's what tea parties are when you are a kid.

There is too much movement which doesn't work however it shows how natural it is and how I was just trying everything to get some good images. It shows how relaxed this photo shoot was and how it was just fun. There is too much going on table and the box shouldn't be there because it has the deflated balloons in it. All the props on the table detract away from the model. This is the same for the background -   there is too much background and a  person in it.

Here we were just trying different poses to see what happened, what worked and what didn't. As you can see this one didn't but its a bit of fun. There are too many plates  and too much going on in it. The bunting and paper chain compliment the colours on the plate on the splodges. They also work as leading lines and make it a bit of fun. It needs slight cropping on right hand side.

We tried dropping balloons in the background to get an effect. I needed faster shutter speed, to capture them without the blur. The light reflects of the red balloon and makes the models skin look redder than what it actually is. This could be photo shopped out. The poses for the models don't work because they look too posed.

One of the models are blinking, and this image is too posed. I wanted to try and create a natural effect which doesn't work with them looking at the camera. The props  are the best aspect because of the colours and there aren't too much. The balloons are the colours of the flag. The room makes it look like a  kids party and fun.

Here we tried capturing movement by throwing a balloon and headering it. We did it to capture some fun images fun but it  didn't work! It needed to be a faster shutter speed. There is also too much going on the table.

Nothing about this image works - the background, has too much going on and people in it just talking, the pose doesn't work, and neither does the facial expression. One the table there is too much going on at the right hand side. The only prop is the balloon and it does work. This isn't what I was going for and it doesn't work.

Trying something different and unique, to look fun and different. Dint work because the angle doesn't work and nothing works well apart from the background with the bunting and paper chains.

out. . This pose looks casual and relaxed, which is one of the things I was going for because I just wanted it to look fun and as if it wasn't a photo shoot. The props work because of the colours and how they relate to my themes, however there is  too much background which needs cropping.

There is far too much top background on the top of this image which needs to be cropped out. This image looks so casual and relaxed which is why I like it. The colour of the jumper in the foreground match the colour of the red on the wall. There is slightly too much blue in this image it over powers it, however I could change that because of the place I was the table was blue and so were the walls.

This image is very posed, however it looks fun and casual. The lighting is so bad however it was the harsh above lights which I couldn't control effecting the shadows. Also you can tell it's in a bowling alley. There is far too much background because of where she was sat. The balloons on floor detract away from the model. I did try to use the rule of thirds for this however it doesn't really show.

This image looks casual and look like talking however one of the models is looking at the camera which makes it looks posed. Also you can tell it is in a bowling alley because of the screens in the background. The models arm works as a leading line towards the other model.